Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Internet is important for modern life. Do you agree or disagree.

Internet is important for modern life. 0weP5

In scientific age, internet has a Number of signs that can proved about it’s importance in our daily life. Overall, we wouldn’t able to do anything at social media without internet. Nearly 95% above people are directly involved with that. Without internet we can't passing a single day. It requires us in our everyday activities. However, some worst signs also have of its, such as People do often crime through it. For instance, hacking, stolen data, misuses of internet. On the other hand, a group of persons are benefited through it. Although it’s has some problems but it has also more effective sites where we get benefited. From the above, unlike misuse of internet rather than effective usages then we will be developed. Internet makes us happy and our activities are strongly increased through that.

In scientific age, internet has a Number of signs that can proved Did you mean "about its importance"?about its importance
about it’s importance
 in our daily life.

Overall
, we wouldn’t able to do anything at social media without internet. Nearly
 95% above This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are directly
 involved with that. Without The comma is probably missing here: "internet, we".internet, we
internet we
 can't The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: "pass"pass
passing
 a single day. It requires us in our everyday activities.

However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 worst signs also
 have of its, such as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 crime through it. For instance
, hacking, stolen data, misuses of internet. On the other hand
, a group of persons Possible agreement error. Did you mean "is"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'are' is not always incorrect.)is
are
 benefited through it. Although it’s has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has also
 more effective sites where we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 benefited.

From the above, unlike misuse of internet rather
 than effective usages then we will be developed
. Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us happy and our activities are strongly
 increased through that. 