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My most impressive vacation was a four-day trip to Bangkok in the summer of two years ago. It was the first time my mother and I visited the beautiful capital of Thailand. The first feeling is overwhelming by the huge, modern international airport. Skyscrapers, shopping malls with outdoor advertising screens are present on almost the main road. This trip is special because I have prepared everything by myself, from booking flight tickets, booking accommodation, joining a famous historical site tour. I admired the beauty of the grand palace and temples as well as the excitement of the floating market. A feature of Thai tourism is food carts on the street side where brings various offerings of ready-to-eat meals, snacks, fruits, and drinks. All items are affordable and have good qualities such as electronics, clothes, toothpaste. Bangkok is really an interesting destination and I had a lot of memorable moments there.
My most impressive vacation was a four-day trip to Bangkok in the summer of two years ago. It was the
first
time my mother and I visited the
beautiful
capital of Thailand. The
first
feeling is overwhelming by the huge, modern international airport. Skyscrapers, shopping malls with outdoor advertising screens are present on almost the main road. This trip is special
because
I have prepared everything by myself, from booking flight tickets, booking accommodation, joining a
famous
historical site tour. I admired the beauty of the grand palace and temples
as well
as the excitement of the floating market. A feature of Thai tourism is food carts on the street side where brings various offerings of ready-to-eat meals, snacks, fruits, and drinks. All items are affordable and have
good
qualities such as electronics, clothes, toothpaste. Bangkok is
really
an interesting destination and I had
a lot of
memorable moments there.
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IELTS essay the most impressive vacation

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