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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important things that people learn in their lives are not learned in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The most important things that people learn in their lives are not learned in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. WyD5D
I ever heard quote " learning from experience is the best way" . In other word, I say that we can learn from anything such as book, experience, and mistake. In simply I want to tell that learning by yourself experience is great choice. Hence, I agree when people say we can learn whenever we are, not just in school. Human created by God to becomes social-interaction-person which means we should have socialization. It occurs around our circumstances like school, home, office, and so on. For example, as student I always go to school six-day in one week and 8-hour a day. It means I have 10-hour to interact in other place like neighboor. I just learn how to solve math or physic problem when I am at school. Because I think school just give me academic-view, not about life-cycle. Teachers just teach subject and discuss also share about it. They are not speak about my daily activity because I know that is not their business. I have many experience when I talk with my friend and also my family-member. I also collect many experience when I talk with my neighboor. I know what is hot-issue outside there, share how many problem I have with them, and do fun-activity in my free-time. Also, I learn from their mistake and try to not do same thing. I also read motivation-book and another books like novel based on true story. I like reading the real-life from another people. They give more inspiration about life and how to handle, control, and solve each problem. I learn many problems like violence, abuse child, spanking, and love-life. So, If I see problem like that, I will know how should I do and never make other people like mom worry about me. In conclusion, I say that school is not best place to gain my experience. It all about learn academically. Learning experience comes from book, people's life and mistake.
I ever heard quote
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In other word, I say that we can
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learn
from anything such as book,
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experience
, and mistake. In
simply
I want to
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tell
that learning by yourself
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experience
is great choice.
Hence
, I
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agree
when
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people
say we can
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learn
whenever we are, not
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just
in school.

Human created by God to becomes social-interaction-person which means we should have socialization. It occurs around our circumstances like
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school
, home, office, and
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so
on.
For example
, as student I always go to
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school
six-day in one week and 8-hour a day. It means I have 10-hour to interact in other place like
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neighboor
. I
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just
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learn
how to solve math or physic
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problem
when I am at
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school
.
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Because
I
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think
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school
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just
give me academic-view, not about life-cycle. Teachers
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just
teach subject and discuss
also
share about it. They are not
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speak
about my daily activity
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because
I know
that is
not their business.

I have
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many
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experience
when I talk with my friend and
also
my family-member. I
also
collect
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many
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experience
when I talk with my
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neighboor
.
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I
know what is hot-issue outside there, share how
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many
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problem
I have with them, and do fun-activity in my free-time.
Also
, I
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learn
from their mistake and try to not do same thing.

I
also
read motivation-book and another books like novel based on true story. I like reading the real-life from another
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people
. They give more inspiration about life and how to handle, control, and solve each
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problem
. I
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learn
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many
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problems
like violence, abuse child, spanking, and
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love
-life.
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So
, If I
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see
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problem
like that, I will know how should I do and never
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make
other
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people
like mom worry about me.

In conclusion
, I say that
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school
is
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not best
place to gain my
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experience
. It all about
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learn
academically
. Learning
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experience
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comes
from book,
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people
's life and mistake.
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IELTS essay The most important things that people learn in their lives are not learned in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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324 words
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