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Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago. In what ways are you the same or different? Use specific examples to support your response.

Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago. In what ways are you the same or different? Use specific examples to support your response. 15P1y

Today, I still being single and graduated as Bachelor Degree of Industrial Engineering. Personally, I am pretty good-looking, responsible, moody, humble, and persistence. I really enjoy what I have to do now because I always think positively. I set my mind to become more respect for each other, help poor-people in my circumstance, and learn from experience and mistakes. I usually learn while I alive because learn has not ending. As I grow up, I learn from my family, friend, and also problem. I believe that what I am doing right now is related to my future. Hence, I never hesitate or gloomy about my present action, I do my best to make other smile and laugh in every way. I also have big dream in 5-years-later, I become successful woman. I married with my handsome and kind spouse and have three children, two twin-sons and one daughter. I create my won business with my husband thus I have leisure time in home to accompany my children. We open shop which sell shoes and bags and also there is cafe behind the store. I decorate the interior with vintage-style, wide parking-area, and small garden beside it. The store is located in the middle of shopping center and also adjacent with my apartment. If I had free-time, I would like go around Europe with my family member. In addition, I still in the person like responsible and persistence. I also being wife who have whole time in kitchen and arrange my home as I want. I accompany my child to their assignment every night, then tell a fairy-tale. I make some breakfast every morning like hot tea and sandwich. I also arrange my small garden at backyard, I have many flowers like tulip, roses, and lily. I arrange my home well so my husband and child feel comfortable while they are in it. Thus, I still the same person now and future. I have the attitude and manner. The difference is just about status. Now, I am still free and get married in future.

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because
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learn
 from experience and mistakes. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 create my won business with my husband thus
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cafe
 behind the store. I decorate the interior with vintage-style, wide parking-area, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 garden beside it. The store is located
 in the middle of shopping center and also
 adjacent with my apartment. If I had free-time, I would like go around Europe with my family member.

In addition
, I still
 in the person like responsible and persistence. I also
 being wife who have whole time in kitchen and arrange my home as I want. I accompany my child to their assignment every night, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 a fairy-tale. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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make
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some
 breakfast every morning like hot tea and sandwich. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 arrange my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 garden at backyard, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 flowers like tulip, roses, and lily. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 arrange my home well This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my husband and child feel comfortable while they are in it.

Thus
, I still
 the same person You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 and future. I have the attitude and manner. The difference is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 about status. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
Now
, I am still
 free and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 married Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. 