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Many families have important traditions that family members share. What is one of your family's important traditions? Use specific reasons and details to support your response.

Many families have important traditions that family members share. What is one of your family's important traditions? Use specific reasons and details to support your response. n6DVn

Tradition reflects what people often act and becomes habit. Tradition creates an image of people and shows the uniqueness of it. It occurs every where like office, society, and even family environment. In relates, I have my family's tradition which is essential and celebrates it every chance that we have. The most main tradition is hanging out in the early of month. I and my family, which consist of father, mother, two little sisters, and a youngest brother, must have time to gather in the beginning month. My mother creates that event and becomes ritual of my family. The aim is closeness am. . .

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Tradition
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people
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 the uniqueness of it. It occurs Did you mean "everywhere"?everywhere
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 which is essential and celebrates it every chance that we have. The most main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withethicpracticefolklorebeliefmythhabit
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 is hanging out in The phrase 'the early of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the early of
 month.

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 youngest brother, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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 and becomes ritual of my family. The aim is closeness am. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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