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The most important knowledge does not come from books.

The most important knowledge does not come from books. 5rAP
It is believed that books don’t procure significant knowledge even though it is the best partner and the greatest source of knowledge to harvest every day. We access the book at such an immature age, it opens a new prospect in front of us and provides us a massive source of vocabulary. But that does not mean it provides us that enough significant knowledge. I totally disagree with the view. Books are the key to opening the new prospect of kids and children. Whenever reading books, it just like wake up the power of imagination. Books are likely to be a collection of innovations, experiences, and provides realistic evidence. They are also believed to be a great way to improve vocabulary and also helps the scientists sustain their examination area. Books are all knowledge that science had proved then utilize it as the fundamental to construct more great information for the new generation. First, books transmit to readers all the old knowledge and experiences that famous people had been through not the reader’s experience or the learning that they get from your realistically days. Just by imagining their circumstance that they may have been suffered or hiring the knowledge, you won’t get what they mean because everyone’s life is completely different from the others that is the reason why the readers have a better face it. In fact, there will be some new circumstance that you never thought to go through it before so the lessons that we harvest every day will help us redress the error that we make. However, we can still heir the valuable lessons and knowledge by watching on tv commercials and hearing your friend’s stories to accumulate then apply them into real life. In this life, no one will be ready to get out there and help you, they are just giving you the fishing rod, not the fish. So by gathering enough experiences you are ready to face all the risky things that you used to be too scared to face and step out of your parent’s safety because dealing with triumphs and disasters is the best way to learn how to deal with life on your own. As can be seen, books; teachers just give us the knowledge but life will give you moral lessons, experiences, and also the opportunities to turn it into perfection.
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to harvest every day. We access the
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prospect in front of us and provides us a massive source of vocabulary.
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that does not mean it provides us that
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enough
significant
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knowledge
. I
totally
disagree with the view.

Books are the key to opening the
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new
prospect of kids and children. Whenever reading
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, it
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just
like wake up the power of imagination.
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are likely to be a collection of innovations,
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experiences
, and provides realistic evidence. They are
also
believed to be a great way to
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improve
vocabulary and
also
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helps
the scientists sustain their examination area.
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Books
are all
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knowledge
that science had proved then utilize it as the fundamental to construct more great information for the
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new
generation.

First
,
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transmit to readers all the
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old
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knowledge
and
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experiences
that
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famous
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people
had been through not the reader’s
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experience
or the learning that they
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get
from your
realistically
days.
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by imagining their circumstance that they may have
been suffered
or hiring the
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, you won’t
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get
what they mean
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because
everyone’s
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life
is completely
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different
from the others
that is
the reason why the readers have a better face it. In fact, there will be
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some
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circumstance that you never
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thought
to go through it
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before
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so
the lessons that we harvest every day will
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help
us redress the error that we
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.
However
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still
heir the valuable lessons and
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by watching on
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tv
commercials and hearing your friend’s stories to accumulate then apply them into real life.

In this
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life
, no one will be ready to
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out there and
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giving you the fishing rod, not the fish.
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by gathering
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enough
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experiences
you are ready to face all the risky things that you
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used
to be too scared to face and step out of your parent’s safety
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because
dealing with triumphs and disasters is the best way to learn how to deal with
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life
on your
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own
. As can be
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seen
,
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books
; teachers
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just
give us the
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knowledge
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life
will give you moral lessons,
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experiences
, and
also
the opportunities to turn it into perfection.
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IELTS essay The most important knowledge does not come from books.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
392 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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