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The most important factor that influences students is a good teacher

The most important factor that influences students is a good teacher N3l6g

At first, behavoiur of students is as much important as knowledge which comes not only from just family but even from school teachers and especially from their head teacher. Over 12 years attending school students not only get knowledge but also life skills and being able to control their emotions because at teenagers ages it is the most important thing to communicate with upbringing with older people and teachers otherwise because of their bad behaviour they cant achieve success in school and in that factor teachers play special role because they give children not just knowledge also upbringing in role of being second mother in their second home.

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