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The most important factor that influences students is a good teacher

The most important factor that influences students is a good teacher N3l6g
At first, behavoiur of students is as much important as knowledge which comes not only from just family but even from school teachers and especially from their head teacher. Over 12 years attending school students not only get knowledge but also life skills and being able to control their emotions because at teenagers ages it is the most important thing to communicate with upbringing with older people and teachers otherwise because of their bad behaviour they cant achieve success in school and in that factor teachers play special role because they give children not just knowledge also upbringing in role of being second mother in their second home.
At
first
,
behavoiur
of students is as much
important
as knowledge which
comes
not
only
from
just
family
but
even from school
teachers
and
especially
from their head
teacher
. Over 12 years attending school students not
only
get
knowledge
but
also
life
skills
and being able to control their emotions
because
at
teenagers
ages it is the most
important
thing to communicate with upbringing with older
people
and
teachers
otherwise
because
of their
bad
behaviour
they
cant
achieve success in school and in that factor
teachers
play special role
because
they give children not
just
knowledge
also
upbringing in role of being second mother in their second home.
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IELTS essay The most important factor that influences students is a good teacher

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