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There is no doubt that schools constitute a vital position in society when it comes to education. Some schools have a different programs for each gender which considered to be a conflict point, people are devoted into two groups. The first one admit that it is more benefciant to educate boys and girls in the same etablisement while the second believe that they should be educated in seperate schools. However, I think that the answer depends on the age of the students. In some people point of view mixed schools go against their beliefs which can cause some frictions in society. Firstly, teachers work in high performance when they have the chance to apply method that suits only one gender. To illustrate, according to a recent experince in GT school students can get more correct answers only in one gender classes. Furthermore, in this way relashenships out of schools will be avoided which is going to low down the rate of school dropout. Lastly, nurmous number of boys be embarassed once they are in the same class with girls. On the other hand, every school manager would like to have an ideal class in which naughty students can be counted on the fingers. First of all, having mixed classes would stimulate students to be more competitive in class. For example, studying only with their friends whom are the same gender as them won't be motivated since class will constitute tiny forgein students for them. additionly, parents won't be obliged to put their children in different schools if they are not the same gender and they can help each other. In conclusion, Although mixed schools are more common nowadays, limitaion of students age in this type of schools should be taken in action.
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schools
constitute a vital position in society when it
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comes
to education.
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Some
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schools
have a
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different
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programs
for each gender which considered to be a conflict point,
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people
are devoted
into two groups. The
first
one admit that it is more
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benefciant
to educate boys and girls in the same
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etablisement
while the second believe that they should
be educated
in
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seperate
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schools
.
However
, I
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think
that the answer depends on the age of the students.

In
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some
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people
point of view mixed
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schools
go against their beliefs which can cause
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some
frictions in society.
Firstly
, teachers work in high performance when they have the chance to apply method that suits
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only
one gender. To illustrate, according to a recent
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experince
in GT
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school
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students
can
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get
more correct answers
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only
in one gender
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classes
.
Furthermore
, in this way
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relashenships
out of
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schools
will
be avoided
which is going
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to
low down the rate of
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school
dropout.
Lastly
,
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nurmous
number of boys be
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embarassed
once they are in the same
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class
with girls.

On the other hand
, every
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school
manager would like to have an ideal
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class
in which naughty
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students
can
be counted
on the fingers.
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First of all
, having mixed
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classes
would stimulate
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students
to be more competitive in
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class
.
For example
, studying
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only
with their friends whom are the same gender as them won't
be motivated
since
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class
will constitute tiny
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forgein
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students
for them.
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additionly
, parents won't
be obliged
to put their children in
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different
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schools
if they are not the same
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gender and
they can
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help
each other.

In conclusion
, Although mixed
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schools
are more common nowadays,
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limitaion
of
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students
age in this type of
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schools
should
be taken
in action.
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IELTS essay mixed schools and separate schools both views

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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