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Some says in the past knowledge stores on books.but now knowledge stores in internet.do you thik the advantages outweigh the disadvantage

Some says in the past knowledge stores on books. but now knowledge stores in internet. do you thik the advantages outweigh the disadvantage 0aEjB
Nowadays internet is storing all shorts of information. it has become like a store house of info. Now individual can gather knowledge from internet while people were dependent on on books in the previous days. Internet is an amazing invention of science and technology. It has provided the opportunity to gather knowledge from anywhere anytime without a piece of paper. One can easily access to the internet and have the information as their need. Acquring knowledge has become easier than before. nowadays one need to wait to buy a book or carry books to learn anything. they just need to access to the internet and search for the internet. more over it saves time. again one can have several information or thought actually a package of information by clicking once for one question. Although there are ample advantages of gaining knowledge from the internet has some disadvantages also. Because of the internet books has losen it's appearance. people don't wanna buy books anymore as a result the writers, press publications are facing much problem. in addition people can't concentrate on internet reading as they do with books so enthusiasm of reading gets hampered. Despite having some disadvantages I believe that advantages of internet Is more. Internet stores and illustrates all types of knowledge before us within a moment while one book stores only one types of data.
Nowadays internet is storing all shorts of
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information
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has become like a store
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house
of info.
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Now
individual can gather
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knowledge
from internet while
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people
were dependent
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on on
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books
in the previous days.

Internet is an amazing invention of science and technology. It has provided the opportunity to gather
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knowledge
from anywhere anytime without a piece of paper.

One can
easily
access to the internet and have the
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information
as their need.
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Acquring
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knowledge
has become easier than
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before
.
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nowadays
one need to wait to
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a
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book
or carry
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books
to learn anything.
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they
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need to access to the internet and search for the internet.
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over it saves time.
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again
one can have several
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information
or
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thought
actually a package of
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information
by clicking once for one question.

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there are ample advantages of gaining
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knowledge
from the internet has
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some
disadvantages
also
.
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anymore
as a result
the writers, press publications are facing much problem.
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addition
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people
can't concentrate on internet reading as they do with
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books
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enthusiasm of reading
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gets
hampered.

Despite having
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some
disadvantages I believe that advantages of internet

Is more. Internet stores and illustrates all types of
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knowledge
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before
us within a moment while one
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book
stores
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IELTS essay Some says in the past knowledge stores on books. but now knowledge stores in internet. do you thik the advantages outweigh the disadvantage

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