Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The most important consideration when choosing a university is how famous it is. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most important consideration when choosing a university is how famous it is. qREmX
Choosing a famous university is an important step. There are many famous universities in the world, but you need to choose the place where is famous, safe, and can support what you want to study in university. First, the famous university has many good points for students and parents. Students can get a lot of benefits thing for both physical and spiritual for their study like sport’s grounds, take meditation, or worship. They are satisfied with all material provided and get improvement for their dream. Second, the famous university has a good oral and moral code of conduct that everyone submits to follow the same rule. They are all treated equally and sharing the same opportunities among the students. They feel safe and value being a student in that university. They also can get both library and online materials for their study. Third, the famous university has a safe ground from any risky life. Students are free to go around the campus without any fear, as a result, they feel and can pay more attention to study. In conclusion, every student should have a chance to choose a famous university for them and get what they want to study at university without any fear and frustration in campus and university life. Therefore, choosing a famous university is an important step for students.
Choosing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
step. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
in the world,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
you need to choose the place where is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
, safe, and can support what you want to study in university.

First
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
points for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and parents.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
benefits thing for both physical and spiritual for their study like sport’s grounds, take meditation, or worship. They
are satisfied
with all material provided and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
improvement for their dream.

Second, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
oral and moral code of conduct that everyone submits to follow the same
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
. They are all treated
equally
and sharing the same opportunities among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. They feel safe and value being a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
in that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
also
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
both library and online materials for their study.

Third, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
has a safe ground from any risky life.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
are free to go around the campus without any fear,
as a result
, they feel and can pay more attention to study.

In conclusion
, every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
should have a chance to choose a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
for them and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
what they want to study at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
without any fear and frustration in campus and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
life.
Therefore
, choosing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
step for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The most important consideration when choosing a university is how famous it is.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    Some university deduct marks from student work
    One of the conspicuous trends of todays world is colossal upsurge in some university believing that cutting marks for late submition is benefital for student. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns. Personally, I do not agree with this idea. In the expository paragraph...
  • 5.5band
    Interesting movie which we you found laughing
    to be honest I really watch many movies even in my childhood but after that I really involve in my study and I have no time to host any movies but after the completion of final years of 12th standard that time I decided to go outside with my one of the closest friend her name is in the preet Kaur Gi...
  • 5.5band
    why scamming is dangerous and how to prevent scamming
    Nowadays, people must face difficulties in their lives due to this competitive world resulting in deceiving others out of desperation to find money. Urges of people to get more money in easy ways lead to a new trend which is scamming. Scammers target all ages and all backgrounds with the use of new ...
  • 6.5band
    Some people believe that school children should be required to do free social work after the school.
    The majority of people consider the benefits of social work and do recommend to school children should be directed to do this. To me, I partly support this viewpoint and my arguments will be explained in further paragraphs. Initially, do some free social work after school might increase some abilit...
  • 5.5band
    should be raised the prices of sugary products to encourage people consume less sugar
    In today’s world, most of people advocate that unhealthy products which have high percentage of sugar have a negative impact on people’s health. Thus, they believe that if these foods are raised prices, the consumption will reduce considerably. In my opinion, that is not the best solution to this pr...
  • 6band
    computer in education institutions rather than teaching
    Technology, particularly, computers are taking over the world and can further be utilised by educational institutions. However, there are two sides to every coin and the said technology can prove to be problematic in a few areas to the studying population. In the modern era, technology is one thing...