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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.

The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Aj08l

For each person there can be both negative and positive aspects and goals because of which he works. Therefore, I consider this statement controversial. Personally, in my opinion, only the money earned matters, without paying for work, work will be more like charity. Firstly, earned funds can be spent on activities in your free time, and in general on anything, it's up to you. Secondly, people still need money to live, so most of them are working to earn money, which they then survive on. We should also remember, not many things and even feelings can be taken over without money. I must admit that my opinion on this matter has been strongly influenced by my own experience. In the end, my opinion remains the same, but these are just my views. For some people, work may be the goal of their life, but this is a completely different topic.

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