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Research center based on business or agriculture

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Both research centers based on business and agriculture would be immense benefit to my country, but I would extend my support to the research center designated specifically to agriculture sector. The major reasons for recommending center based on agriculture is because India depends on agriculture for major part of its national income and plethora of farmers rely on farming for their livelihood. Considering these reasons I would suggest that a research center on agriculture would be of atmost importance to improve the socio-economic conditions of my country.
Both research
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based on business and
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agriculture
would be immense benefit to my country,
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specifically
to
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agriculture
sector.

The major reasons for recommending center based on
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agriculture
is
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because
India depends on
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agriculture
for major part of its national income and plethora of farmers rely on farming for their livelihood.

Considering these reasons I would suggest that a research center on
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agriculture
would be of
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atmost
importance to
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socio-economic
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IELTS essay Research center based on business or agriculture

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