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Movie story I enjoyed and why?

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There are a lot of movies I enjoy but one movie story which stood out to me was "Pursuit of happiness". It was a movie whoch I saw during my school days but even after a decade I can remember the story and the characters as it had a huge impact on me. The best part about the story was the characterization and relatability. There are a lot of movies which show lives of rich people and lives of people in the creamy layer but this movie depicted the struggles of a common man in a big city with dreams and responsibilties. I found the story to be realistic and perfect and I don't think it could have been better.

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