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The mobile phones are gadgets which are being used by everyone around the world. While these devices are used more often to increase productivity and it can be inverse. The restriction of the mobile phones usage in schools have a positive development.

The mobile phones are gadgets which are being used by everyone around the world. While these devices are used more often to increase productivity and it can be inverse. The restriction of the mobile phones usage in schools have a positive development. 6aBql
Restricting phone use in the classroom itself can improve learning. The distractions caused by the phones can be cut of and increase concentration. A class full of forty students using mobiles get difficult to the teacher to handle, however removing such gadgets can grab the student's attention on the class. Diverting their mind towards the phones will lead to missing the important topics taught in the class and in the end effect the student's grades. Hence these are the changes can occur if the phones are restricted. Less usage of phones are good for students well being. The less they use the mobiles the more they can improve in being stable mentally, the overall health of the student is much more important to get going in the academics and choose career options in the future. A highly motivated student which less distractions caused by the gadgets can perform well and become successful. Using less phones will improve the ability to learn and understand the critical topics taught in the school. So restriction on the usage of mobiles has a gradual increase and help the students to determine their abilities. To summarize it in a nutshell the usage of mobile phones has its own pros and cons, However limiting the usage can be helpful in increasing productivity of the students which is a positive sign in developing the overall performance.
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in the classroom itself can
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improve
learning. The distractions caused by the
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phones
can be
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cut
of and increase concentration. A
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class
full of forty
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students
using mobiles
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get
difficult to the teacher to handle,
however
removing such gadgets can grab the student's attention on the
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class
. Diverting their mind towards the
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phones
will lead to missing the
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important
topics taught in the
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class
and in the
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end
effect the student's grades.
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Hence
these are the
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changes
can occur if the
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phones
are restricted
.

Less
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usage
of
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phones
are
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for
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students
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well being
. The less they
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use
the mobiles the more they can
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improve
in being stable mentally, the
overall
health of the
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student
is much more
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to
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going in the academics and choose career options in the future. A
highly
motivated
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student
which
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less
distractions caused by the gadgets can perform well and become successful. Using
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less
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phones
will
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improve
the ability to learn and understand the critical topics taught in the school.
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restriction on the
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usage
of mobiles has a gradual increase and
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help
the
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students
to determine their abilities.

To summarize
it in a nutshell the
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usage
of mobile
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phones
has its
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own
pros and cons,
However
limiting the
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usage
can be helpful in increasing productivity of the
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students
which is a
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positive
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sign
in developing the
overall
performance.
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IELTS essay The mobile phones are gadgets which are being used by everyone around the world. While these devices are used more often to increase productivity and it can be inverse. The restriction of the mobile phones usage in schools have a positive development.

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