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The method for producing canned fish is depicted in the illustration.

The method for producing canned fish is depicted in the illustration. rY9wm

The method for producing canned fish is depicted in the illustration. Overall, the process of canning fish is linear, commencing with fishing and culminating in distribution for consumption. To begin with, after being caught by the fishing vessels, fishes are frozen at -18*C for preservation. Then, these fishes are unloaded by ship before being taken measurement. In the next step, thawed fishes are prepared by cutting their head and tail in prior to steaming. The following step is to cool fishes in a certain time, after which they are sliced into small pieces for the purpose of canning. Fishes are filled in the can and then brine, water or oil would be added in order to keep the product in good quality. Next, these cans are sealed and sterililized at high temperature to remove dirt and kill germs for longer-term storage. Labels are wrapped around the cans for the reason that the customers would know the basic information of the products. Ultimately, the cans are stored and then dispatched for consumption.

The method for producing canned fish is depicted
 in the illustration. Overall
, the process of canning fish is linear, commencing with fishing and culminating in distribution for consumption.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, after being caught
 by the fishing vessels, fishes are frozen
 at -Replace by the typographical symbol.18×C18·C
18*C
 for preservation. Then, these fishes are unloaded
 by ship This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being taken
 measurement. In the next
 step, thawed fishes are prepared
 by cutting their head and tail in prior to steaming. The following step is to cool fishes in a certain time, after which they are sliced
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces for the purpose of canning.

Fishes are filled
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
 and then brine, water or oil would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the product in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality. Next
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are sealed
 and Possible spelling mistake found.sterilized
sterililized
 at high temperature to remove dirt and kill germs for longer-term storage. Labels are wrapped
 around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 for the reason that the customers would know the basic information of the products. Ultimately
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are stored
 and then dispatched for consumption. 