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The merits and demerits of traditional clutures were used as money-making attractions

The merits and demerits of traditional clutures were used as money-making attractions aABR9

Traditional cultures unique in single reigns are used to attract the attention of people from other areas, promoting the tourism industry of the local sites. In order to enhance the profits, an ascending number of traditions are end up as money-earning attractions focused on tourists. Some people suppose that trend might be detrimental to the traditional cultures. Others, however, argue that it will ultimately help preserve these cultures. Before rending my position, I’d like to explore both sides.

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people
 from other areas, promoting the tourism industry of the local sites. In order to enhance the profits, an ascending number of traditions are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up as money-earning attractions focused on tourists. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
 suppose that trend might be detrimental to the traditional cultures. Others, however
, argue that it will ultimately
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help
 preserve these cultures. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 rending my position, I’d like to explore both sides. 