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The media should include stories which report good news do you agree or disagree, v.1

The media should include stories which report good news , v. 1
It is now not uncommon to see negative news hit the headlines and appear frequently in the mass media. For this reason, many people believe that media positivity should be encouraged and I do agree with this idea for two main reasons. First, audiences are increasingly bombarded with negative stories and therefore, good news should be reported more often to balance out. In fact, journalism’s commitment to being the society’s watchdog is understandable, but excessive negativity in the news can be harmful. For instance, after a tragic plane crash in Malaysia was broadcast, news agencies the world over started to report similar accidents during the next months. This created collective fear for traveling by air, which consequently hurt the aviation industry despite the fact that air transport is still the safest option, with incident rates far lower than those for road and rail transport. In this way, an excessive amount of bad news caused distorted views and this is why more good news is worth reporting. Secondly, happiness is highly contagious, hence the need for positive media coverage. Good news can inspire readers or viewers to take action, which can benefit themselves and even society as a whole. The success of Flappy Bird, a mobile game created by Dong Nguyen that caused a global sensation in 2013, has been an encouraging story. Thousands of Vietnamese app developers have subsequently tried to start their own business in order to follow in Dong Nguyen’s footsteps. Although very few of them can achieve similar success, entrepreneurship is promoted, which comes as good news for both developers themselves and the country’s economy. In conclusion, my belief is that news agencies should dedicate more to positive news because it can create a healthy journalism balance and also spread positivity.
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hit the headlines and appear
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believe that media positivity should
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agree
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for two main reasons.

First
, audiences are
increasingly
bombarded with
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stories and
therefore
,
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good
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should
be reported
more
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often
to balance out. In fact, journalism’s commitment to being the society’s watchdog is understandable,
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but
excessive negativity in the
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news
can be harmful.
For instance
, after a tragic
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plane
crash in Malaysia was broadcast,
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news
agencies the world over
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started
to report similar accidents during the
next
months. This created collective fear for traveling by air, which
consequently
hurt the aviation industry despite the fact that air transport is
still
the safest option, with incident rates far lower than those for road and rail transport. In this way, an excessive amount of
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bad
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news
caused distorted views and this is why more
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good
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news
is worth reporting.

Secondly
, happiness is
highly
contagious,
hence
the need for
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media coverage.
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news
can inspire readers or viewers to take action, which can benefit themselves and even society as a whole. The success of
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Flappy
Bird, a mobile game created by Dong Nguyen that caused a global sensation in 2013, has been an encouraging story. Thousands of Vietnamese app developers have
subsequently
tried to
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start
their
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own
business in order to follow in Dong Nguyen’s footsteps. Although
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very
few of them can achieve similar success, entrepreneurship
is promoted
, which
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comes
as
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good
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news
for both developers themselves and the country’s economy.

In conclusion
, my belief is that
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news
agencies should dedicate more to
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positive
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news
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because
it can create a healthy journalism balance and
also
spread positivity.
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IELTS essay The media should include stories which report good news , v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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