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The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

The media should include more stories which report good news. v. 1
It is now ubiquitous to see negative news hit the headlines and appear frequently in the mass media. For this reason, many people believe that media positivity should be encouraged. I agree with this to some extent, but I also think that negative news is not always a bad thing. On the one hand, including good news in the media may have positive effects on the general public. It helps restore our faith in humanity, which inspires moral courses of action to uphold ethical social values. Everyday news headlines are filled with traumatic events such as robbery, murdering, rape or oppression because science has revealed that people are more drawn to unpleasant incidents. Media stories of good news, as opposed to bad news, can also have a positive psychological implication. Such stories can uplift people to become more optimistic and generally improve both physical and mental health. For example, the first ever black hole image captured by a young woman with her brilliant algorithm has inspired people, especially females, to push the boundaries of science. On the other hand, negative stories also show their own certain benefit which helps people to stay aware of problems around them and take actions accordingly. It is clear that shocking headlines can easily draw the attention of the public, so using them as a tool to raise public’s awareness regarding social matters or global issues would be the best way. Having an objective view towards life is crucial for any healthy development of the society and economy. In conclusion, having more good news publicised on the social media would admittedly bring more positives to human life. Although negative news still has an important place in our life, its severity should be realized so that readers can fully reap all the benefits that the media has to offer.
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see
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negative
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hit the headlines and appear
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media
.
For this reason
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many
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people
believe that
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positivity should
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with this to
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some
extent,
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also
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that
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is not always a
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thing.

On the one hand, including
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good
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news
in the
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media
may have
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positive
effects on the
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general public
. It
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helps
restore our faith in humanity, which inspires moral courses of action to uphold ethical social values. Everyday
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news
headlines
are filled
with traumatic
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events
such as robbery, murdering, rape or oppression
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because
science has revealed that
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people
are more drawn to unpleasant incidents.
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Media
stories of
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good
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news
, as opposed to
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bad
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news
, can
also
have a
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positive
psychological implication. Such stories can uplift
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people
to become more optimistic and
generally
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improve
both physical and mental health.
For example
, the
first
ever black hole image captured by a young woman with her brilliant algorithm has inspired
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people
,
especially
females, to push the boundaries of science.

On the other hand
,
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negative
stories
also
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show
their
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own
certain benefit which
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helps
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people
to stay aware of problems around them and take actions
accordingly
. It is
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clear
that shocking headlines can
easily
draw the attention of the public,
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so
using them as a tool to raise public’s awareness regarding social matters or global issues would be the best way. Having an objective view towards life is crucial for any healthy development of the society and economy.

In conclusion
, having more
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good
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news
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publicised
on the social
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media
would
admittedly
bring more positives to human life. Although
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negative
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news
still
has an
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important
place in our life, its severity should
be realized
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so
that readers can
fully
reap all the benefits that the
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media
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has to
offer.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The media should include more stories which report good news. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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