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The material discusses the migration of edmontosaurus every winter.

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The material discusses the migration of edmontosaurus every winter. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely edmontosaurus should migrate to find food. Next, living in herd could support the hypothesis of migration. Finally, edmontosaurus are physically capable to immigrate long distance. Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction is a hundred years ago the weather in Alaska's North Slope are warmer than today; furthermore, in the arctic region sun shined the whole day during the summer, which provided a good growing condition for plants, and edmontosaurus could live on the dead vegetations during the winter. In addition to that, living in a herd did not mean that edmontosaurus migrated, animals could live in herd for other purposes, such as extra protection from predators, For example, although elks live in herd, they do not migrate. One final point, young edmontosaurus physically did not able to migrate long distance. Given that edmontosaurs live in herd they could not migrate and leave young ones; moreover, juvenile edmontosaurus could not survive alone. In summary, there are many discrepancies in the presented information.
The material discusses the migration of
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edmontosaurus
every winter. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain
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points
outlined in the reading passage.

Firstly
, the reading
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details
specific
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points
regarding this topic,
namely
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edmontosaurus
should
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migrate
to find food.
Next
, living in
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herd
could support the hypothesis of migration.
Finally
,
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edmontosaurus
are
physically
capable to immigrate long distance.

Conversely
, the lecture challenges the
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points
, one specific contradiction is a hundred years ago the weather in Alaska's North Slope are warmer than
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today
;
furthermore
, in the arctic region sun shined the whole day during the summer, which provided a
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good
growing condition for plants, and
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edmontosaurus
could
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live
on the dead
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vegetations
during the winter.
In addition
to that, living in a
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herd
did not mean that
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edmontosaurus
migrated, animals could
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live
in
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herd
for other purposes, such as extra protection from predators,
For example
, although elks
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live
in
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herd
, they do not
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migrate
. One final
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point
, young
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edmontosaurus
physically
did not able to
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migrate
long distance.
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Given
that
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edmontosaurs
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live
in
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herd
they could not
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migrate
and
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leave
young ones;
moreover
, juvenile
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edmontosaurus
could not survive alone.

In summary, there are
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many
discrepancies in the presented information.
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IELTS essay The material discusses the migration of edmontosaurus every winter.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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