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The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. blX3
The mass media have a powerful influence in shaping our lives. We have come to depend on them for information and entertainment, and in doing so we let them affect important aspects of our lives. The undeniable usefulness of the media in almost instantly providing information about events around the world is largely taken for granted. But in our dependence on the media, we have allowed them to mould our notions and opinions of events, places and people. Though few of us probably think about it, our conceptions of, say, our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never meet prime ministers or presidents, but anyone who is regularly exposed to the media will have an opinion of them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will make our decision based on how the media portray the candidates. We are similarly swayed by coverage of wars. The media, representing the values of their owners, societies and governments, tend to report wars with a bias; which is the 'good' side and which the 'bad' is determined for us by reporters, editors and commentators, and sure enough the public begins to form opinions that reflect the coverage they see, hear and read in the major media.
The mass
media
have a powerful influence in shaping our
lives
. We have
come
to depend on them for information and entertainment, and in doing
so
we
let
them affect
important
aspects of our
lives
.

The undeniable usefulness of the
media
in almost
instantly
providing information about
events
around the world is
largely
taken for granted.
But
in our dependence on the
media
, we have
allowed
them to
mould
our notions and opinions of
events
, places and
people
. Though few of us
probably
think
about it, our conceptions of, say, our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never
meet
prime ministers or presidents,
but
anyone who is
regularly
exposed to the
media
will have an opinion of them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will
make
our decision based on how the
media
portray the candidates. We are
similarly
swayed by coverage of wars. The
media
, representing the values of their owners, societies and
governments
, tend to report wars with a bias; which is the '
good
' side and which the '
bad
'
is determined
for us by reporters, editors and commentators, and sure
enough
the public
begins
to form opinions that reflect the coverage they
see
, hear and read in the major
media
.
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IELTS essay The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.

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