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The little sisters in the ceiling

The little sisters in the ceiling 8aDjm
The little sisters went into the room to play at the ball. “ We must be careful not to wake the white cat” the tall one said, softly. “ Or to spoil the roses” the fat one whispered; “ But throw high dear sister, or we shall never hit the ceiling. ” “ You dear children” thought the white cat, “ Why do you come to play here at all? Only just round the corner are the shady trees, and the birds singing on the branches, and the sunshine is flecking the pathway. Who knows but what, out there, your ball might touch the sky? Here you will only disturb me, and perhaps spoil the roses, and at best you but hit the ceiling! ”
The
little
sisters went into the room to play at the ball. “ We
must
be careful not to wake the white cat” the tall one said,
softly
. “ Or to spoil the roses” the
fat
one whispered;
But
throw high dear sister, or we shall never hit the ceiling. ”
You dear children”
thought
the white cat,
Why do you
come
to play here at all?
Only
just
round the corner are the shady trees, and the birds singing on the branches, and the sunshine is flecking the pathway. Who knows
but
what, out there, your ball might touch the sky? Here you will
only
disturb me, and perhaps spoil the roses, and at best you
but
hit the ceiling! ”
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IELTS essay The little sisters in the ceiling

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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