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is better to tell the truth other than telling lies in every ocassion

is better to tell the truth other than telling lies in every ocassion Pg07j
First of all, I believe that a lot of people like to tell lies rather than telling the truth on every occasion. Many people lie for good and many people lie to avoid trouble. Everyone likes to create some lies, a child can create some lies, and also older people like to create some lies even though it's clear it's not good for all of us. So, it's better, to be honest than lying because it will cause a lot of trouble. When lying, other people will have trust issues with the person who is lying. Lies that are said or done will have a bad impact as well as a good impact on people who lie, but most of those who do lie will have a bad impact. For example, someone who lies by accusing others even though there are witnesses who have seen that person's actions so the person who accused can't lie or there is someone who lies by making their own excuses but there are witnesses who saw the incident so the person who accused can't cover up the mistakes. For another example, a girl was bullied by a male friend so that this girl was traumatized and reported to the principal, after that the principal asked the boy who bullied the girl to tell his story but the boy denied it and said that he did nothing to the girl. In the end, the boy was not given any punishment, he was only advised by the principal, but the girl that reported to the principal accused of making a false statement, and she got a warning from her principal. So, the girl who reported to the principal was disadvantaged by the boy who lied about his actions. Therefore it is better, to tell the truth than to lie and as a result, other people who are not guilty are harmed or blamed because the guilty person is lying.
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rather
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people
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for
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good
and
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many
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people
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to avoid trouble. Everyone likes to create
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some
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lies
, a child can create
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some
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lies
, and
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older
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people
like to create
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some
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even though
it's
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it's not
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good
for all of us.
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, it's better, to be honest than
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it will cause
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trouble.

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will have trust issues with the
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person
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who
is
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lying
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that
are said
or done will have a
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impact
as well
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,
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who
do
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will have a
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bad
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, someone
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who
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by accusing others
even though
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have
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seen
that person's actions
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accused can't
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or there is someone
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by making their
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own
excuses
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the incident
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accused can't cover up the mistakes.

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was bullied
by a male friend
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was traumatized
and reported to the
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asked the
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bullied the
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denied it and said that he did nothing to the
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was not
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accused of making a false statement, and she
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girl
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reported to the
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was disadvantaged
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who
lied about his actions.

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Therefore
it is better, to
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tell
the truth than to
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and
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people
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who
are not guilty
are harmed
or blamed
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the guilty
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IELTS essay is better to tell the truth other than telling lies in every ocassion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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