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DO the advantages of nuclear power outweigh its drawbacks?

DO the advantages of nuclear power outweigh its drawbacks? ABMjN
In developing society, overusing fossil fuels is a serious problem in various ways that have negatively affect humanity. Nuclear energy is the efficient way to decline the problems of fossil fuels but this power also provides effective conditions for a nuclear weapon that can lose its balance over the world. From my perspective, I suggest that the advantages of nuclear power outweigh its drawbacks but anyway it gives some threat to a peaceful life. To begin with, nuclear technology gives suitable conditions about prices and its freshness. Making a comparison with fossil fuels, nuclear energy does not release greenhouse gas emissions which have to threaten influences in our environment. Nuclear power normally comes from natural and clean resources such as wind, water, or the sun. In addition, although technological material is high-cost, the prices of the electricity bills per month reduce significantly. Solar power, for example, is transported by the sun, and the installed solar panels quite high, while the bill will pay less than before. One day we all will be bound to use nuclear power to continue our life when there won't be any natural gas, fuels at all. Moreover, many of the first world countries have achieved the nuclear power and have become a superpower. It can initially seem that the mono-polarization of nuclear power preserves world peace but the idea is not agreeable always. The present world is not in a position where powerful countries will shout at weaker and the peace will prevail. The reality is we notice lots of suicide bombing attacks and hatred; the wrath of the people is so acute that they won't even think about the existence of our civilization. To maintain peace there must be a peaceful way. Anger, Power threat, and domination can't keep the peace in the world. So I disagree with the statement that nuclear weapons can maintain world peace and far-weight the disadvantages but I do agree with the idea that nuclear power can be a great source of cheap energy. In conclusion, the development of nuclear technology will dominant in modern society by its advantages. In spite of some drawbacks of nuclear weapons and power, their advantages are enumerable. However human should use in safety and effective ways.
In developing society, overusing fossil
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is a serious problem in various
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that have
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affect
humanity. Nuclear energy is the efficient
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way
to decline the problems of fossil
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fuels
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but
this
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power
also
provides effective conditions for a nuclear weapon that can lose its balance over the
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world
. From my perspective, I suggest that the advantages of nuclear
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power
outweigh its drawbacks
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but
anyway it gives
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some
threat to a peaceful life.

To
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begin
with, nuclear technology gives suitable conditions about prices and its freshness. Making a comparison with fossil
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fuels
, nuclear energy does not release greenhouse gas emissions which
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have to
threaten influences in our environment. Nuclear
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power
normally
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comes
from natural and clean resources such as wind, water, or the sun.
In addition
, although technological material is high-cost, the prices of the electricity bills per month
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reduce
significantly
. Solar
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power
,
for example
,
is transported
by the sun, and the installed solar panels quite high, while the bill will pay less than
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before
. One day we all will
be bound
to
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use
nuclear
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power
to continue our life when there won't be any natural gas,
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at all.

Moreover
,
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many
of the
first
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world
countries have achieved the nuclear
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power
and have become a superpower. It can
initially
seem that the mono-polarization of nuclear
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power
preserves
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world
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peace
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but
the
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idea
is not agreeable
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always
. The present
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world
is not in a position where powerful countries will shout at weaker and the
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peace
will prevail. The reality is we notice lots of suicide bombing attacks and hatred; the wrath of the
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people
is
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so
acute that they won't even
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think
about the existence of our civilization. To maintain
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peace
there
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must
be a peaceful
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. Anger,
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threat, and domination can't
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keep
the
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peace
in the
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.
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So
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world
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and far-weight the disadvantages
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but
I do
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agree
with the
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that nuclear
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power
can be a great source of
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cheap
energy.

In conclusion
, the development of nuclear technology will dominant in modern society by its advantages.
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In spite of
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some
drawbacks of nuclear weapons and
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, their advantages are enumerable.
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However
human should
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use
in safety and effective
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ways
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IELTS essay DO the advantages of nuclear power outweigh its drawbacks?

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  American English
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