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The two blue prints illustrates A accountancy's office before and after modernization. In general, the first floor plan had many rooms with small walking spaces while after improvements the offices were well organised spacious with seating sofas at the reception. The first plan had nearly ten partitioned offices which made it congested. Office equipment like copier and fax machines were in accounts office, new customers office and payroll area. Long corridor in the middle of the building that lead to every office. On the other hand, after structural improvement of the office, adjacent to reception storage room was introduced. The office equipments were centrally place next to the reception accessible to open specious office desks. Soffas were introduced both at the reception and open area office in the centre of the building. Lunch, meeting and managers rooms were maintained as they were before redesigning took place.

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office
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before
 and after modernization.

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, the first
 floor plan had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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small
 walking spaces while after improvements the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
offices
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well organised
 spacious with seating sofas at the reception.

The first
 plan had nearly
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offices
 which made it congested. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
Office
 equipment like copier and fax machines were in accounts You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, new customers You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 and payroll area. Long corridor in the middle of the building that lead to every office.

On the other hand
, after structural improvement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, adjacent to reception storage room was introduced
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 equipments were centrally
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place
next
 to the reception accessible to open specious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
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were introduced
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office
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centre
 of the building. Lunch, meeting and managers rooms were maintained
 as they were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 redesigning took place. 