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After graduation, what should student do?

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After graduation, what should I do? The idea of a student after graduating from a university has been an everlasting question. There are many ways to make a living, but no one can recommend on the best for you. You need to figure that out yourself. Currently, the educational status of workers is constantly improving, the diploma system is enhanced and expanded. There are a lot of orientation of career for students coming out of college. Some students want to continue to learn to get the master’ degree. So, job opportunities that suit their level and have a high salary will go up. In the old days people with a high level of education usually had a good job and handsome salary. There days, however, it’s a completely different story. Many people are now asking themselves this question after they graduate. One option is the high salary job. You will have a stable income that can allow you to enjoy life. However, we should not forget that we need to work hard and constantly improve ourselves in orther to keep this high salary job and stay competitive. The other option is the hobbi job. The good thing about it is that you can do what you like and what you are really interested in and it won’t be a waste of time beacause of your passion for the work. On the other hand, having a hobbi job may not provide as stable income as a high salary job does so it may be harder to save money for future. Working the nice job but the salary is low, so many people quit looking for work when they find a job. Some other people think that salary is not important because they have passion and still decide to pursue their favorite job even though the salary is not high. Nowadays, the expectations for graduates are higher than ever. Students can no longer go straight into office work and work for their entire lives like they used to. Accoding to recent research, college graduates who are looking for jobs could be facing their toughest competition yet because of an increased number of well-educated applicants. There is no job for business school graduates as so many people who has experiences working are looking for jobs, competing with newly graduated students The cream of graduates will get high-paid jobs. Besides, the number of graduates from regular universities and colleges throughout the country without jobs is increasing day by day, because poor graduates and not much necessary experience and skills. Hence, a part of they choose working as workers, or doing jobs that do not require a university degree.
After graduation, what should I do? The
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after graduating from a university has been an everlasting question. There are
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many
ways to
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make
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no one can recommend on the best for you. You need to figure that out yourself.

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, the educational status of workers is
constantly
improving, the diploma system
is enhanced
and expanded. There are
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a lot of
orientation of career for
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students
coming out of college.

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Some
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students
want to continue to learn to
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get
the master’ degree.
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So
,
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job
opportunities that suit their level and have a
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high
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salary
will go up.

In the
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old
days
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people
with a
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high
level of education
usually
had a
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good
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job
and handsome
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. There days,
however
, it’s a completely
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different
story.
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are
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asking themselves this question after they
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graduate
. One option is the
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high
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salary
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job
. You will have a stable income that can
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allow
you to enjoy life.
However
, we should not forget that we need to
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work
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hard
and
constantly
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improve
ourselves in
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orther
to
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keep
this
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and stay competitive. The other option is the
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hobbi
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. The
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thing about it is that you can do what you like and what you are
really
interested in and it won’t be a waste of time
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beacause
of your passion for the
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.
On the other hand
, having a
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hobbi
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job
may not provide as stable income as a
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high
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salary
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job
does
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so
it may be harder to save money for future. Working the nice
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but
the
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is low,
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so
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people
quit looking for
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when they find a
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.
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other
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is not
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important
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because
they have passion and
still
decide to pursue their favorite
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job
even though
the
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salary
is not high.

Nowadays, the expectations for
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graduates
are higher than ever.
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Students
can no longer go straight into office
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work
and
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work
for their entire
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lives
like they
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used
to.
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Accoding
to recent research, college
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graduates
who are looking for
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jobs
could be facing their toughest competition
yet
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because
of an increased number of well-educated applicants. There is no
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job
for business school
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graduates
as
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has
experiences working are looking for
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jobs
, competing with
newly
graduated
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students
The cream of
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graduates
will
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get
high-paid
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jobs
.
Besides
, the number of
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graduates
from regular universities and colleges throughout the country without
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jobs
is increasing day by day,
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because
poor
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graduates
and not much necessary experience and
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skills
.
Hence
, a part of they choose working as workers, or doing
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jobs
that do not require a university degree.
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IELTS essay After graduation, what should student do?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
444 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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