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The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions that citizens in four given countries released from 1967 to 2007.

The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions that citizens in four given countries released from 1967 to 2007. GL9wm

The line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions that citizens in four given countries released from 1967 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that the amount of CO2 emissions in Italy and Portugal increased gradually whereas UK and Sweden people emitted lower CO2 emissions. To be more specific, the amount of CO2 emissions in Italy in 1976 was higher than in Portugal, with more than 4 tonnes, compared to about 1 tonne in Portugal. Both countries witnessed upward trends in the emitting CO2 emission in the whole period, with Italy accounting for nearly 8 tonnes, and Portugal making up more than 5 tonnes. It can be seen that, in 1967, UK took the lead in emitting the amount of CO2 by each person, with about 11 tonnes. It was followed by Sweden, at around 9 tonnes. In the following years, the amount of CO2 emission was produced lower in England, at around 9 tonnes in 2007. By contrast, there was a considerable increase in the amount of CO2 emissions in Sweeden in 1977, at about 11 tonnes before going down to under 6 tonnes at the end of the period.

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