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Each person must have the ideal partner for themselves.

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Each person must have the ideal partner for themselves. For me, my ideal partner is a good heart, honesty, and respect parents, hardworking, and educated. Moreover, she is also a pretty and attractive woman. Firstly, I love my ideal partner very much because she is enough clever to keep my heart cheerful and always helps me when I need her, especially in my studies. Besides that, my girlfriend is good heart and responsible when she always reminds me that education is very important because that is what determines our future. Therefore I have to put my education first and when I have problems in studying, we can share with each other to solve together. Last but not least, my woman always respect my parents by greeting them, asking them whenever she helping them in some situations. For my conclusion, when we want to choose the ideal partner for us, we must know the background of her life and characteristics so that we can choose a suitable lover in the futureesty, and respect parents, hardworking, and educated. Moreover, she is also a pretty and attractive woman. Firstly, I love my ideal partner very much because she is enough clever to keep my heart cheerful and always helps me when I need her, especially in my studies. Besides that, my girlfriend is good heart and responsible when she always reminds me that education is very important because that is what determines our future. Therefore I have to put my education first and when I have problems in studying, we can share with each other to solve together. Last but not least, my woman always respect my parents by greeting them, asking them whenever she helping them in some situations. For my conclusion, when we want to choose the ideal partner for us, we must know the background of her life and characteristics so that we can choose a suitable lover in the future
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Firstly
, I
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cheerful and always
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me when I need her,
especially
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Besides
that, my girlfriend is
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and responsible when she always reminds me that
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very
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because
that is
what determines our future.

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Therefore
I
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have to
put my
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education
first
and when I have problems in studying, we can share with each other to solve together. Last
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but
not least, my woman always
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respect
my
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parents
by greeting them, asking them whenever
Did you mean "she's helping", "she is helping", or "she was helping"?
she helping
them in
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some
situations.

For my conclusion, when we want to
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for us, we
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IELTS essay Each person must have the ideal partner for themselves.

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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