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The given diageam illustrates the way of producing sugar from sugar cane. Overall there are seven steps in making sugar cane starting from growing and at last sugar is formed. First, sugarcane consumes 12-18 months to reach its harvesting point. After, growing it to desired height, farmers harvest them either with the aid of vechicalsbfor farm or by their one hand with assist of knife. Thirdly, the plucked sugarcane are crushed into machine which comes out as juice. The crushed sugarcane are of no use by this point because, juices are in use which is filtered in limestone to purify the liquid extracted from sugarcane. Fifthly, liquid us heated in a cylindrical flask which converts it into syurup. then by the centrifuge method the crystals are seprated from syrup. Lastly by drying and cooling the crystals sugar is formed.
The
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diageam
illustrates the way of producing
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sugar
from
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sugar
cane.
Overall
there are seven steps in making
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sugar
cane starting from growing and at last
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sugar
is formed
.

First
, sugarcane consumes 12-18 months to reach its harvesting point. After, growing it to desired height, farmers harvest them either with the aid of
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vechicalsbfor
farm or by their one hand with assist of knife.
Thirdly
, the plucked sugarcane
are crushed
into machine which
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comes
out as juice. The crushed sugarcane are of no
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use
by this point
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because
, juices are in
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use
which
is filtered
in limestone to purify the liquid extracted from sugarcane.
Fifthly
, liquid us heated in a cylindrical flask which converts it into
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syurup
.
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then
by the centrifuge method the crystals are
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seprated
from syrup.
Lastly
by drying and cooling the crystals
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sugar
is formed
.
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IELTS essay Describe the process below

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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