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Lack of Sport in school nowadays

Lack of Sport in school nowadays Mmxj9

In my opinion, there is a lack of sports in school’s curriculum nowadays, especially in Vietnam. One clear evidence is the modest physiques of our citizens compared to that of other countries in the world. In spite of recent changes, the effect of teaching sports in schools is not so noticeable due to low facilities condition and also time pressure for other academic subjects like Math or Literature.

In my opinion, there is a lack of sports in school’s curriculum nowadays, especially
 in Vietnam. One This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 evidence is the modest physiques of our citizens compared to that of other countries in the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 recent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the effect of teaching sports in schools is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 noticeable due to low facilities condition and also
 time pressure for other academic subjects like Math or Literature. 