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The life cycle of a species of large fish called the simon.

The life cycle of a species of large fish called the simon. XlX8N

The figures depict the several stages of the salmon fishes from its birth to the mature niche. This kind of fish needs to change its aphid from the river to the sea. The reproduction series of the salmon fish is quite exceptional. The adult salmons come to the river from the sea, and lay eggs in the upper river. The eggs remain in this condition for five to six months under the small stones and the reeds, until these eggs turn into fry from the eggs. After this stage, the fry enter into the lower river from the upper river, since the tides of the upper river moves slow, on the other hand, lower river is fast-moving. The fry require about four years to be developed into smolts. Since, molts are the younger age of the salmon fishes, the size of them is approximately 12 to 15 cm and this is just the earlier niche of the adult salmons. As it is acknowledged that, salmons are brought up and availbale in the seas, the smolts change their lives into elder age and their shapes increase to 70 to 76 cm in the final stage of their reproduction cycles.

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 into elder age and their shapes increase to 70 to 76 cm in the final stage of their reproduction cycles. 