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Some people think that it is the responsibilty of the residents to keep their surrounings clean and tidy and some says it is the duty of government. Discuss both the view points

Some people think that it is the responsibilty of the residents to keep their surrounings clean and tidy and some says it is the duty of government. Discuss both the view points Ag2O1

Clean and healthy enviornment leads to a happy mind and healthy body. A school of thought proposes that individuals living in an area are responsible for its cleaness while others contend that government is responsible for its maintanance. I would, thereby, look into both the perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs. Apparently, individuals are the main cause of the waste generation on the earth so its their duty to keep their surroundings by providing efforts individually because everyone cannot do everything but everyone can do something and with the help of each person's contribution in waste management like reducing use of non biogergradable items such as plastic, proper management of dry and wet house wastes and so on, it will more beneficial for the locals as well as for the whole society. Above and beyond this, state has also a crucial role to play in the maintaing clean and helathy green enviornment for the sake of the people of its country as government would try to create awareness among the masses by orgainsing camps and protest and also by celebrating healthy enviornment day they would realise their contribution towards their society and they must give proper attention to it and would participate in it from the core of their heart. At the end of the day, I aver that government and locals both play vital role for the healthy living enviornment and their contribution is incomplete without each other.

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healthy
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enviornment
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healthy
 body. A school of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 proposes that individuals living in an area are responsible for its Possible spelling mistake found.cleanerscleanestclearnesscleannesscleanses
cleaness
 while others contend that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is responsible for its Possible spelling mistake found.maintenance
maintanance
. I would, thereby, look into both the perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs.

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, individuals are the main cause of the waste generation on the earth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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its
 their duty to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their surroundings by providing efforts individually
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because
 everyone cannot do everything This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 everyone can do something and with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of each person's contribution in waste management like reducing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of non Possible spelling mistake found.biodegradable
biogergradable
 items such as plastic, proper management of dry and wet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 wastes and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on, it will more beneficial for the locals as well
 as for the whole society.

Above and beyond this, state has also
 a crucial role to play in the Possible spelling mistake found.maintainmaintainsmaintain g
maintaing
 clean and Possible spelling mistake found.healthy
helathy
 green Possible spelling mistake found.environment
enviornment
 for the sake of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of its country as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 would try to create awareness among the masses by Possible spelling mistake found.organizingordaining
orgainsing
 camps and protest and also
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healthy
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enviornment
 day they would Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
realise
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society and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 give proper attention to it and would participate in it from the core of their heart.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day, I aver that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 and locals both play vital role for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 living Possible spelling mistake found.environment
enviornment
 and their contribution is incomplete without each other. 