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The life cycle of a frog

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Ever wondered how the life cycle of a frog actually works? . Well to start the life cycle consists of 6 stages, Which will be thoroughly explained one by one. To start off with a male and a female frog mating, Which then will be continued by the female frog laying a relatively large amount of frog spawn (egg). These frog spawn will later hatch and small tadpoles will emerge. Constantly the tadpoles then develop parts of its body, For example growing legs on the right and left side. The process then proceeds to transform into a young frog. You can see in this specific stage that it's starting to become more frog-like with additional hands appearing. Making it easier for the frog to navigate its way around. Spots on its back surfacing, distinctly can be seen with one's eye. The tail is shrinking, becoming smaller over time and time until it finally dissipates completely from its body. With the frog finishing its maturity. It is now the time to find a mate and continue the cycle again.
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the life cycle consists of 6 stages, Which will be
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explained
one by one.

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off with a male and a female
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mating, Which then will
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by the female
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laying a
relatively
large amount of
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spawn (egg). These
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spawn will later hatch and
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tadpoles will emerge.
Constantly
the tadpoles then develop parts of its body,
For example
growing legs on the right and
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left
side. The process then proceeds to transform into a young
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frog
. You can
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in this specific stage that it's starting to become more frog-like with additional hands appearing. Making it easier for the
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frog
to navigate its way around. Spots on its back surfacing,
distinctly
can be
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seen
with one's eye. The tail is shrinking, becoming smaller over time and time until it
finally
dissipates completely from its body. With the
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frog
finishing its maturity. It is
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now
the time to find a mate and continue the cycle again.
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IELTS essay The life cycle of a frog

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
178 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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