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I am a doctoral student and I am studying European History

I am a doctoral student and I am studying European History GM0oo

I am a doctoral student and I am studying European History. I have to prepare a thesis until the end of the year. My thesis subject is "God and Science in Europe". I continue my work with my school notes and free sources I found online. However; I lack the resources to do my homework. Many of the resources available on the Internet contain copyright and are insufficient for the information they provide. That's why I decided to examine the books in libraries. The book "God and Science in Europe" in your library is a resource that can meet my needs. But I heard that borrowing books from your library is prohibited. I would love to spend time in your library, but deadline of my thesis is getting on. Also, I don't have much time to complete the assignment. In short, I am writing this letter to borrow the "God and Science" book. If you accept my request I will be very grateful to you.

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