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The layouts represents the road connectivi etivity for a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010.

The layouts represents the road connectivi etivity for a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. nRlX7
The layouts represents the road connectivi etivity for a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. Overall, the structure of ally hospital remained unchanged, whereas some sood' design and pook's location as well pooking meas introduced. Firstly, in year 2007, the bus stop situated for East from city hospital and it was this connected to ho hospital. In contrast to this, in new construetion of 2010, bus station joined with two roundabout, which connect with city hospital. However, the ring road was unaltered as similar to city hospital () Furthermore, the position of city road and hospital road a was! angodabut a roundabout introduced both roads one was at central position of elny arvad, which linked to hospital soad and another on hospital road that connect hospital and new bus stop, moving to the next, previ previously public and staff con port was the same but now it had chimped and shifted to two different locations.
The layouts
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represents
the road

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connectivi


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etivity
for a city
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hospital
in two

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different
years, 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, the structure of
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ally
hospital

remained unchanged, whereas
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some
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sood
'

design and
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pook
's location
as well


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pooking
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meas
introduced.

Firstly
, in year 2007, the bus
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stop
situated

for East from city
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hospital
and it was

this connected to ho
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hospital
.
In contrast


to this, in new
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construetion
of 2010, bus

station
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joined
with two roundabout, which

connect with city
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hospital
.
However
,

the ring
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road
was unaltered
as similar to

city hospital

()

Furthermore
, the position of city
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road
and

hospital
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road
a
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was
!
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angodabut
a

roundabout introduced both roads

one was at central position of
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elny
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arvad
,

which linked to
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hospital
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soad
and

another on
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hospital
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road
that connect

hospital and new bus
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stop
, moving to the

next
,
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previ


previously public and staff con port

was the same
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but
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now
it had
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chimped


and shifted to two
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different
locations.
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IELTS essay The layouts represents the road connectivi etivity for a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
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