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In natural scenic spots, such as lakes, mountains and beaches there are much litter or rubbish. Why do people do that? How to deal with it?

In natural scenic spots, such as lakes, mountains and beaches there are much litter or rubbish. Why do people do that? How to deal with it? Jl8yB
These days the pollution produced by tourists has threatened the natural environment of some tourist attractions, making it a big problem to be addressed before those places are completely damaged. This essay shall try to highlight some reasons why people litter these places and also suggest some ways forward. The most important reason why people litter these tourist places is that they have little awareness of environmental conservation. People think that their one plastic bottle or one wrapper of chips does not matter. What they don’t realize is that if each tourist has the same thought then very soon these natural scenic spots would turn into mountains of such litter. People also don’t know that this rubbish is mostly of non-biodegradable material and will stay like that for ever. Another reason why people don’t care is that they think it is not their responsibility. They think the onus of keeping these places clean rests on the authorities. They have to realize that the environment is everyone’s responsibility. Finally, the environmental protection facilities are not enough in many tourist attractions. People would not litter these places if trashcans were there at regular intervals. The first step towards sustainable tourism would be that the governments and tourist companies could educate the tourists about their responsibilities. Tourists should be made aware through the media and tour operators about responsible tourism. They should be made to realise that their careless attitude could kill future tourism and nothing would be left for the gen-next. Additionally, the authorities should have proper facilities at such places and if facilities are not enough according to the number of tourists then the number of tourists should be limited. To conclude, it can be said that irresponsible tourism has led to damage of the natural environment and at many places the tourist places have been so much littered that they have ceased being a tourist attraction any more. The responsibility of saving these spots rests on both – the tourists and the government. One should remember the saying, “A good tourist is one who leaves behind nothing but footprints and takes away nothing but photographs.
These days the pollution produced by
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tourists
has threatened the natural environment of
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some
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tourist
attractions, making it a
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big
problem to
be addressed
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before
those
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places
are completely damaged. This essay shall try to highlight
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some
reasons why
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people
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litter
these
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places
and
also
suggest
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some
ways forward.

The most
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important
reason why
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people
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litter
these
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tourist
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places
is that they have
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little
awareness of environmental conservation.
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People
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think
that their one plastic bottle or one wrapper of chips does not matter. What they don’t realize is that if each
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tourist
has the same
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thought
then
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very
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soon
these natural scenic spots would turn into mountains of such
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litter
.
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People
also
don’t know that this rubbish is
mostly
of non-biodegradable material and will stay like that for ever.

Another reason why
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people
don’t care is that they
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think
it is not their
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responsibility
. They
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think
the onus of keeping these
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places
clean rests on the authorities. They
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have to
realize that the environment is everyone’s
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responsibility
.
Finally
, the environmental protection facilities are not
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enough
in
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many
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tourist
attractions.
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People
would not
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litter
these
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places
if trashcans were there at regular intervals.

The
first
step towards sustainable
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tourism
would be that the
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governments
and
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tourist
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companies
could educate the
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tourists
about their
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responsibilities
.
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Tourists
should
be made
aware through the media and tour operators about responsible
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tourism
. They should
be made
to
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realise
that their careless attitude could kill future
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tourism
and nothing would be
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left
for the gen-
next
.
Additionally
, the authorities should have proper facilities at such
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places
and if facilities are not
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enough
according to the number of
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tourists
then the number of
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tourists
should
be limited
.

To conclude
, it can
be said
that irresponsible
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tourism
has led to
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damage of
the natural environment and at
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many
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places
the
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tourist
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places
have been
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so
much littered that they have ceased being a
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tourist
attraction
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any more
. The
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responsibility
of saving these spots rests on both
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–
the
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tourists
and the
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government
. One should remember the saying, “A
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good
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tourist
is one who
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leaves
behind nothing
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but
footprints and takes away nothing
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but
photographs.
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IELTS essay In natural scenic spots, such as lakes, mountains and beaches there are much litter or rubbish. Why do people do that? How to deal with it?

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