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The layout delineats about how renewable energy is used to generate electricity

The layout delineats about how renewable energy is used to generate electricity KGbq6
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that electricity is generated by water, which is converted into steam and produce electricity from it On scrutinising the scheme, it is striking to see that, stored cold water is pumped down almost 4. 5 km below the ground level. Then water is collected in the injection well and after that it is passed through geothermal zone Analysing further, it is lucid that, After passing through hot rocks the water is stored in the production well. The temperature of water is increased and now the hot water is lifted up to condenser. The condenser converted the water In form of steam and pushed toward generator turbine, in which team is converted into energy
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that electricity
is generated
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
, which
is converted
into steam and produce electricity from it

On
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scrutinising
the scheme, it is striking to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that, stored
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is pumped
down almost 4. 5 km below the ground level. Then
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is collected
in the injection well and after that it
is passed
through geothermal
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
zone


Possible spelling mistake. 'Analysing' is British English.
Analysing
further
, it is lucid that, After passing through hot rocks the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is stored
in the production well. The temperature of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is increased
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
the hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "lifted".
lifted up
to condenser. The condenser converted the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
In form of steam and pushed toward generator turbine, in which team
is converted
into
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
energy

IELTS essay The layout delineats about how renewable energy is used to generate electricity

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  American English
3 paragraphs
121 words
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