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the environmental pollution in Ha Noi

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In fact, pollution makes people here less healthy, and some even suffer from life-threatening /laɪf-ˈθrɛtnɪŋ/ diseases such as lung cancer, skin cancer, and so on. Therefore, the government must deal with this problem right away. Cutting down on vehicle /ˈviːɪkl/ use is the best way to reduce air pollution and noise pollution. We can do this by encouraging people to use public transportation. Besides, those who litter should pay a heavy fine. Finally, I think the best solution is to raise awareness /əˈweənəs/ and educate people to protect the environment. In short, the environmental / ɪnˌvaɪərənˈmɛntl / pollution is not only Ha Noi but Viet Nam, even is the global problem, not only Ha Noi but Viet Nam, that calls for radical actions for environment protection and rehabilitation. More than that, the problem should be resolved on a global level by the united efforts of the global community.

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pollution
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pollution
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people
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pollution
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