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The issues of educational needs and provision were explored by working with a group of Syrian refugee women in Mardin

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Recruitment: The issues of educational needs and provision were explored by working with a group of Syrian refugee women in Mardin State. This state was chosen for its easy access and because it is located in southern Turkey, where the largest number of Syrian refugees are concentrated. The Turkish government has also opened a department for teaching in the Arabic language at Mardin University. The sample was recruited by sending emails with information sheets, and consent sheets through contacts within Mardin State. Potential participants were asked to contact us if they were interested in taking part in the study. Demographics of sample: The sample was composed of 24 interviewees with a mean age 27. 66 years (standard deviation 7. 34 years). The ethnicity of the women comprised 17 Arabs, six Kurds and one Turkmen. The geographical distribution of the Syrian cities from which the research sample is displaced from is presented in Fig. 2. It is evident that there is a widespread geographically within Syria, and the main geographic centers and cultures are represented within the sample. The average time since displacement from city of origin was 6. 5 years (range 2– 9 years). In terms of previous employment before displacement/asylum, and their current work, most of the sample members had not worked in the past and reported that this was the result of Syrian culture that did not focus on women’s work opportunities, emphasising instead their role within the family. As for working in countries of asylum/safety, most of the sample members were currently studying in Turkish universities, meaning that they had acquiesced to their new influences of culture.
Recruitment: The issues of educational needs and provision
were explored
by working with a group of Syrian refugee women in
Mardin


State. This state
was chosen
for its easy access and
because
it
is located
in southern Turkey, where the largest number of Syrian refugees
are concentrated
. The Turkish
government
has
also
opened a department for teaching in the Arabic language at
Mardin
University. The
sample
was recruited
by sending emails with information sheets, and consent sheets through contacts within
Mardin
State. Potential participants
were asked
to contact us if they
were interested
in taking part in the study. Demographics of
sample
: The
sample
was composed
of 24 interviewees with a mean age 27. 66 years (standard deviation 7. 34 years). The ethnicity of the women comprised 17 Arabs, six Kurds and one Turkmen. The geographical distribution of the Syrian cities from which the research
sample
is displaced
from
is presented
in Fig. 2. It is evident that there is a widespread
geographically
within Syria, and the main geographic centers and cultures
are represented
within the
sample
. The average time since displacement from city of origin was 6. 5 years (range 2– 9 years). In terms of previous employment
before
displacement/asylum, and their
current
work, most of the
sample
members had not worked in the past and reported that this was the result of Syrian culture that did not focus on women’s work opportunities,
emphasising
instead
their role within the family. As for working in countries of asylum/safety, most of the
sample
members were
currently
studying in Turkish universities, meaning that they had acquiesced to their new influences of culture.
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IELTS essay The issues of educational needs and provision were explored by working with a group of Syrian refugee women in Mardin

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270 words
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