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The introduction of the presentation, topic is ecofriendly- cars

The introduction of the presentation, topic is ecofriendly- cars G96VB
We all know that the environment today is extremely polluted and most of the reason is due to emissions from cars. These cars use a lot of the earth's energy sources such as gas, oil, and coal - which are non-renewable energies. That is why we need other things that are environmentally friendly, do not emit a lot of Co2 and use natural sources. Here are a few vehicles that we think will meet these requirements and some of its advantages also disadvantages.
We all know that the environment
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IELTS essay The introduction of the presentation, topic is ecofriendly- cars

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83 words
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