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Write a paragraph about these office problems

Write a paragraph about these office problems G96Qg
Lately, I have to face with an office problem. I have learnt a lesson after that. It was last Tuesday, my company has an important meeting on Thursday and my boss told me to print the documents to prepare for the meeting. It was delayed. Then on Thursday, I started to print them 30 minutes before the meeting. But unfortainetely, there’s a problem. The printer is not working as it always does. At first, I thought it was the computer or internet connection. But after a while, I realised that the real issiue is the printer. I was freaking out and immiadiatly called technician to come and fix this. He responded but he said he can’t come and checked in that moment. So, I didn’t completed my mission and my boss was so angry. After that, I have sit down and think about it. My lesson is always have to prepare 1 day ealier in case the problem like this happened again
Lately, I
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have to
face with an office problem. I have
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learnt
a lesson after that. It was last Tuesday, my
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company
has an
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important
meeting on Thursday and my boss
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told
me to print the documents to prepare for the meeting. It
was delayed
. Then on Thursday, I
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started
to print them 30 minutes
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before
the meeting.
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But
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unfortainetely
, there’s a problem. The printer is not working as it always does. At
first
, I
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thought
it was the computer or internet connection.
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But
after a while, I
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realised
that the real
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issiue
is the printer. I was freaking out and
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immiadiatly
called technician to
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come
and
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fix
this. He responded
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but
he said he can’t
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come
and
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checked
The usual collocation for "that moment" is "at" not "in". Did you mean "At that moment"?
in that moment
.
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So
, I didn’t
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completed
my mission and my boss was
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so
angry. After that, I have sit down and
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think
about it. My lesson is always
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have
to prepare 1 day
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ealier
in case the problem like this happened
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again

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about these office problems

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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