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the Internet security issues that must be considered in the future?

the Internet security issues that must be considered in the future? QKLoK

Two friend talking about a book on facebook messenger. few moment Latter they both See Same book advisement on their facebook feed to Amazone. Someone make Status on Facebook that, we are enjoying a movie at cinema hall with all Family member. A thief who is a facebook friend with him, when he see the Stutus at the Same time, he just think that, it best time for done my job because now his home Alone. however, when we buying some product from online website we get the produce in front to door by home delivery service. but when we make paid on online by using credit card details. it is a mistake because if any hacker hack this website data he can reach your credit card information. when we browsing Internet we visit a lot of website, and for our needs we download file, photos and videos in our laptop. if we are not careful than we can lost our information and data or any other thing by hacking. it can happen when we download anything with hidden virus.

Two Possible agreement error. The noun 'friend' seems to be countable, so consider using: "friends".friends
friend
 talking about a book on If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Facebook Messenger
facebook messenger
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFew
few
 moment Latter they both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 Same

book advisement on their Possible spelling mistake found.Facebookface book
facebook
 feed to Possible spelling mistake found.AmazonAmazonsAmazon e
Amazone
.

Someone The pronoun 'Someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "makes", "made".makesmade
make
 Status on Facebook that, we are enjoying a movie atPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
cinema hall with all Family member. A thief who is a Possible spelling mistake found.Facebookface book
facebook
 friend with him, when he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sees", "saw".seessaw
see
 the Possible spelling mistake found.StatusTutusS tutus
Stutus
 at the Same time, he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "thinks", "thought".thinksthought
think
 that, A determiner is probably missing here: "it the best".it the best
it best
 time for done my job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 his home Alone.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, when Did you mean "we're buying", "we are buying", or "we were buying"?we're buyingwe are buyingwe were buying
we buying
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 product from online website we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the produce The usual preposition for "in front" is "of". Did you mean "in front of"?in front of
in front to
 door by home delivery service. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 paid on online by using credit card This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is a mistake This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if any hacker hack this website data he can reach your credit card information.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
Did you mean "we're browsing", "we are browsing", or "we were browsing"?we're browsingwe are browsingwe were browsing
we browsing
 Internet we visit Possible agreement error. The noun website seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of websites".a lot of websites
a lot of website
, and for our needs we download file, photos and videos in our laptop. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 we are not Use "carefuller" to make a comparison with this adjective.carefuller
careful
 than we can lost our information and data or any other thing by hacking. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 can happen when we download anything with hidden virus. 