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Do you often have dreams? Do you usually remember your dreams

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Everyone in this life has a dream to follow and they want to achieve their goal the dream makes us happy and lets us keep going in this life even if we stumble, the dream helps us rise. So I couldn’t imagine living my life without a dream or putting a plan to achieve what I want in this world. The dream is changed depending on our circle life when we grow up it is different from when we are young or when we teenagers or an adult. My dream is to become a doctor‏ and the specialization is heart surgery it is wonderful to think about how you can help other people and give them another chance to live and heart disease have more Its causes are many, it could be infection, parasites, heart attack, etc The heart is the basis for the life of this body. Knowing everything about it changes your thinking. How can a piece the size of the palm how the body get work Now the dream is changed I couldn’t achieve this one in my life because my grade at my school is less than what the universities required to study this major buy I can’t stop thinking about this I read I read to expand my knowing repertoire on this topic. ‏ And my new dream right now is just to get a high score in the IELTS exam.
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without a
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or putting a plan to achieve what I want in this world.

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changed
depending on our circle
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when we grow up it is
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from when we are young or when we
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teenagers
or an adult.

My
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dream
is to become a doctor‏ and the specialization is
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heart
surgery it is wonderful to
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think
about how you can
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help
other
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people
and give them another chance to
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live
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heart
disease have more Its causes are
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, it could be infection, parasites,
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heart
attack, etc

The
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heart
is the basis for the
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life
of this body. Knowing everything about it
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changes
your thinking. How can a piece the size of the palm how the body
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get
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work


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Now
the
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is
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changed
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life
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my grade at my school is less than what the universities required to study this major

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buy
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thinking about this I read

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And my new
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right
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now
is
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a high score in the IELTS exam.
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IELTS essay Do you often have dreams? Do you usually remember your dreams

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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