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The internet search engine. The internet is a platform that all of us have use at this point of our lives, depending on our lifestyle and work we spend different hours at the web, but have you ever think about the process of the information you look online? The first step is telling the search engine what we are looking for, it can be the meaning of a word or even a movie, the interne have anything you can imagine, then to find the information
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IELTS essay The internet search engine.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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