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The Internet provides us with informations about life and cultures of different countries, and some people say it is not neccessary to visit these countries to learn aboyt them. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant example.

The Internet provides us with informations about life and cultures of different countries, and some people say it is not neccessary to visit these countries to learn aboyt them. with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant example. 0xP9
Internet is a useful tool that can give us any kind of information about place and cultures. A considerable number of explorers do not use the Internet as a source for their travel, considering it as unnecessary, while a minor part thinks that it is helpful in particular circumstances. To a certain extent, the Internet is not fundamental to know a nation, but it can help in critical situations. Initially, a traveller programmed a trip because they want to visit a particular zone or states and know its customs and traditions. First of all the voyagers ask for important information about the cultural heritage of the visiting place to natives. For instance, the tourist will hear about myth or history connect to the folklore of the nation by an aboriginal. Secondly, only aboriginal people know better their land than an electronic device. For example, an aboriginal can communicate the locus facts about their homeland or town. On the other hand, a minor part of tourists has used the Internet to get out of critical situations. One of the motives is the Internet can help people when they get lost in a particular area or place of their trip. To exemplify, the tourist got lost and they can not ask help to return to the hotel because the aboriginal speaks only the native language, so the tourist uses the Internet to see where the hotel is on the map. Another motive is the Internet can provide the type of information to organise accurately the trip. An example is the current value of cash, the traveller needs to know the current value to travel in a different country if they have to use the money for an emergency. This other face of the conversation explains the slight support for not using the internet for travels. In a nutshell, a part of visitors believes that we can use the Internet to visit a place, while the other part does not think so. However, we should consider the Internet more like a helper in critical cases than useful guides because the best experience is the individual one.
Internet is a useful tool that can give us any kind of information about
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place
and cultures. A considerable number of explorers do not
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use
the Internet as a source for their travel, considering it as unnecessary, while a minor
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part
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thinks
that it is helpful
in particular
circumstances. To a certain extent, the Internet is not fundamental to
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know
a nation,
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but
it can
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help
in critical situations.

Initially
, a
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traveller
programmed a trip
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because
they want to visit a particular zone or states and
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know
its customs and traditions.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
the voyagers
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ask for
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important
information about the cultural heritage of the visiting
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place
to natives.
For instance
, the
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tourist
will hear about myth or history connect to the folklore of the nation by an aboriginal.
Secondly
,
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only
aboriginal
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people
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know
better their
Use "lander" to make a comparison with this adjective.
land
than an electronic device.
For example
, an aboriginal can communicate the locus facts about their homeland or town.

On the other hand
, a minor
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part
of
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tourists
has
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used
the Internet to
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get
out of critical situations. One of the motives is the Internet can
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help
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people
when they
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get
lost in a particular area or
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place
of their trip. To exemplify, the
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tourist
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got
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lost and
they can not ask
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help
to return to the hotel
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because
the aboriginal speaks
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only
the native language,
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so
the
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tourist
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uses
the Internet to
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see
where the hotel is on the map. Another motive is the Internet can provide the type of information to
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organise
accurately
the trip. An example is the
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current
value of cash, the
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traveller
needs to
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know
the
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current
value to travel in a
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different
country if they
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have to
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use
the money for an emergency. This other face of the conversation
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explains
the slight support for not using the internet for travels.

In a nutshell, a
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part
of visitors believes that we can
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use
the Internet to visit a
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place
, while the other
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part
does not
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think
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so
.
However
, we should consider the Internet more like a helper in critical cases than useful guides
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because
the best experience is the individual one.
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IELTS essay The Internet provides us with informations about life and cultures of different countries, and some people say it is not neccessary to visit these countries to learn aboyt them. with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant example.

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4 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
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