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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is believed that the problems with the environment must be fixed on a global scale, but on the other side it is agreed it is better to solve it nationally. Despite the fact that the problems with the environment are a problem of all countries, it does not mean that the problems of not really developed countries should be solved from investigation of other countries. On the one hand, it is logical that this type of problem is a problem of our whole world. Furthermore, if not really developed country is struggling from a bad environment, and humans get health diseases because of this, places that have better quality of life and money should definitely help the first one. Firstly, due to the fact that we are living in the same world, with the same lives, why people should be struggling from the problems with oxygen and e. d. On the other hand, in my opinion the governments of undeveloped countries think that all other places must help them, for instance investigating for the solution of a problem. Noteworthy, countries that are much more powerful and developed than the others, do not have to fix the environment all over the world. Despite the fact that the citizens of the country with environmental problems are struggling from this, governments still believe that all problems must be solved by somebody, but not by themselves. What I mean by this, is that if you can not solve your problems by your own powers, nobody would do this. To conclude, I want to say that, despite the fact that the environmental problems are really dangerous in our time, countries should solve them by their own powers and money.
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that the
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problems
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environment
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must
be
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fixed
on a global scale,
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on the
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other
side it is
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agreed
it is better to solve it
nationally
. Despite the
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fact
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problems
with the
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environment
are a
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problem
of all
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countries
, it does not mean that the
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problems
of not
really
developed
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countries
should
be solved
from investigation of
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other
countries.

On the one hand, it is logical that this type of
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problem
is a
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problem
of our whole world.
Furthermore
, if not
really
developed
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country
is struggling from a
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bad
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environment
, and humans
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get
health diseases
because of this
, places that have better quality of life and money should definitely
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help
the
first
one.
Firstly
, due to the
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fact
that we are living in the same world, with the same
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lives
, why
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people
should be struggling from the
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problems
with oxygen and e. d.

On the
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other
hand, in my opinion the
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governments
of undeveloped
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countries
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think
that all
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other
places
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must
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help
them,
for instance
investigating for the solution of a
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problem
. Noteworthy,
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countries
that are much more powerful and developed than the others, do not
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have to
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fix
the
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environment
all over the world. Despite the
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fact
that the citizens of the
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country
with environmental
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problems
are struggling from this,
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governments
still
believe that all
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problems
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must
be solved
by somebody,
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but
not by themselves. What I mean by this, is that if you can not solve your
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problems
by your
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own
powers, nobody would do this.

To conclude
, I want to say that, despite the
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fact
that the environmental
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problems
are
really
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dangerous
in our time,
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countries
should solve them by their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
powers and money.
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IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
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6.5
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