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The Internet offers people a number of benefits.

The Internet offers people a number of benefits. aQP39

(2) First, social networking sites provided by the Internet are great tools for them to connect with friends. (3) As online platforms allow people to make phone calls or send messages instantly, they can easily stay connected with their friends or relatives without travelling long distances. (4) Second, the Internet also gives the young chances to have access to a great amount of knowledge. (5) Thanks to search engines like Google, students and employees can get materials from various sources to support their work and study.

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IELTS essay The Internet offers people a number of benefits.

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American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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