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Regular communication between employees and managers is the most important factor leading to a successful organization.

Regular communication between employees and managers is the most important factor leading to a successful organization. Vy1kO

I agree with this idea for two reasons. Firstly, if communication between employees and managers is good, managers can know what problems the employees are facing and therefore help them to solve the problems. Sometimes, they can share their issues and give advice to each other. Secondly, communication helps to create a supportive working environment. For example, some employees do not have a good relationship with their managers and they are often bored with their jobs. Therefore, communication is one of the factors which help you have more motivation to work and make people satisfied with their jobs.

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