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Some people believe that ther sould

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fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debateable issue. there are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments. on the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society, individuals given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place. this dettering effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimising the number of crimes committed. if people knew they would be ablt to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. this would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts. on the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into condieration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self defense cannot be compare to a serial killer, moving from one civtim to the next. in my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and endure justice and equity. there have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. however, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. and example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is competition law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of femine taking into consideration the distress and hunger. Also, a person killing in self defense will be exempted from punishment.
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fixing
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for each type of
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crime
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debateable
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arguments supporting both views, those for and those against
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fixed
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on
the one hand,
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fixed
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will have a deterring effect on society, individuals
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given
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crime
, will reconsider committing this act in the
first
place.

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this
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dettering
effect
also
leads to social stability and security, through
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minimising
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committed.

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if
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to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the
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they
are accused
of, penal decisions would be
largely
arbitrary.
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this
would result into criminals getting away with their
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crimes
and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of
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on
the other hand, taking the circumstances of a
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crime
and its motivation into
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condieration
is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.

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self defense
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compare
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civtim
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.
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my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and endure justice and equity.

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there
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, criminal
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provide for a minimum and maximum for the
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and the
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also
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foresee certain cases of exemptions.

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and
example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is competition
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law
where a person
being held
liable of a
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crime
under this
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law
will
be convicted
to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.

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exempts
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stealing food during a period of
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self defense
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from
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IELTS essay Some people believe that ther sould

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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