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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. Writing Task 2

These days International network uses a lot. So, some think that we should put our eyes on it. While others believe it is not necessary and that is assualt on privacy. This essay will discuss the both sides and will draw my personal concluion. In one hand, supervision on internet is convinient way to crack down the crime and terroist because the full privty will encourage people who want to join terroist groups to communicate with groups even plan to terroist works even though we have cameras and good supervision system. For example, a terroist attack in New York happend last month, after police searches found that the terroist get touch with ISIS by a website. So, that why some think that we should controversial the internet. On the other hand, observing on world wide web helps governments to control people and puplic. To illsutrate, Snowdn's paper shows that American government was observing internet and every one was hacked. Hence the belief that we should not trying to control the internet. While assualt privacy is inconstitioational in many contries around the world and observing is a kind of asualts on privacy. For an instance, Snowdn's paper that I already mentioned become a big case in USA because the constitioation of US is block any kind of assallts on privacy. This prove clearly that observing is illegal thing in many countries. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both point views, I believe that we can not put any chains on internet or any thing else people want to be free and feel thier selves secure.
These days International network
uses
a lot.
So
,
some
think
that we should put our eyes on it. While others believe it is not necessary and
that is
assualt
on privacy. This essay will discuss the both sides and will draw my personal
concluion
.

In one hand, supervision on internet is
convinient
way to crack down the crime and
terroist
because
the full
privty
will encourage
people
who want to
join
terroist
groups to communicate with groups even plan to
terroist
works
even though
we have cameras and
good
supervision system.
For example
, a
terroist
attack in New York
happend
last month, after police searches found that the
terroist
get
touch with ISIS by a website.
So
, that why
some
think
that we should controversial the internet.

On the other hand
, observing on
world wide web
helps
governments
to control
people
and
puplic
. To
illsutrate
,
Snowdn
's paper
shows
that American
government
was observing internet and every one
was hacked
.
Hence
the belief that we should not
trying
to control the internet.

While
assualt
privacy is
inconstitioational
in
many
contries
around the world and observing is a kind of
asualts
on privacy. For an instance,
Snowdn
's paper that I already mentioned become a
big
case
in USA
because
the
constitioation
of US is block any kind of
assallts
on privacy.
This prove
clearly
that observing is illegal thing in
many
countries.

In conclusion
, after a careful analysis of both point views, I believe that we can not put any chains on internet or
any thing
else
people
want to be free and feel
thier
selves secure.
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IELTS essay The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Writing Task 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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