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The internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication.some people believe that it is advantages but others believe that It has many disadvantages.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. some people believe that it is advantages but others believe that It has many disadvantages. 7pyx2
In this modern-era Internet is a main platform of knowledge and interaction. Therefore, a fair number of individual say that it has many merits. However, opponents think that it has number of demerits. Here by, I am going to discuss both views along with my opinion in the crimp of my writing. To begin with former view, that it has many advantages. Firstly, it is time saving. As, with the help of internet working people as well as students can get any kind of information related to their field just in one click. Apart from this, internet is a powerful source of information and a individual not only get information, but also find the meaning of unfamiliar word with the help of online dictionary. Secondly, Because of the availability of online video call grandparents can talk to their kith and kins who live far away from their homes. Due to which they can still feel that they are close to each other. On the other hand that it has many disadvantages Firstly, due to Internet physical books lost their importance because everyone prefer to get knowledge quickly online instead of finding it in books. Moreover, internet also create digital divide between relationship. As everyone all eachother in difficult situations instead of visiting them physically. In conclusion, although it has many merits as information on internet can be find quickly. yet i belive that it has many demerits because of it library's lost their importance and it lead to digital gap between realtions.
In this modern-era Internet is a main platform of knowledge and interaction.
Therefore
, a
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number of individual say that it has
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many
merits.
However
, opponents
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think
that it has number of demerits. Here by, I am going to discuss both views along with my opinion in the crimp of my writing.

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with former view, that it has
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many
advantages.
Firstly
, it is time saving. As, with the
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help
of internet working
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people
as well
as students can
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get
any kind of
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information
related to their field
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just
in one click. Apart from this, internet is a powerful source of
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information
and
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a
individual not
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only
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get
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information
,
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but
also
find the meaning of unfamiliar word with the
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help
of online dictionary.
Secondly
,
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Because
of the availability of online video call grandparents can talk to their kith and
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kins
who
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live
far away from their homes. Due to which they can
still
feel that they are close to each other.

On the other hand
that it has
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many
disadvantages
Firstly
, due to Internet physical books lost their importance
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because
everyone
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to
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get
knowledge
quickly
online
instead
of finding it in books.
Moreover
, internet
also
create digital divide between relationship.
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As
everyone all
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eachother
in difficult situations
instead
of visiting them
physically
.

In conclusion
, although it has
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many
merits as
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information
on internet can be
Consider using a past participle here: "found".
find
quickly
.
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yet
i
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belive
that it has
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many
demerits
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because
of
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it library
's lost their importance and it
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lead
to digital gap between
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realtions
.
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IELTS essay The internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. some people believe that it is advantages but others believe that It has many disadvantages.

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4 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
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